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This was sent anonymously through the site feedback function at Lushstories a little while ago, and forwarded to me.


The story, Nude-Holly-Day, by Reject Reality was one of the most enjoyable, intense, well crafted, and even instructive stories I've ever encountered. While the biology-based eroticism is excellent in most of your stories, this one (Holly) was far beyon that. The Holly story was to regular good stories as color is to black-and-white because of the added layers in the story.
a. Honor and decency. The protagonist portrayed the best characteristics of respect and appreciation for the Holly character.
b. The caring he showed Holly added depth to the story far beyond the delightful eroticism.
c. The honor and care showed for the Holly character by the protagonist put this story into the top level of literature.
d. The details of the physical love-making functioned almost as a lesson for top-level love-making. Society would profit from this sort of story being made to be required reading for all high-schoolers.

I would give the Holly story a 10 if that were possible. If permissible, pas on my comments to the author, and know that I would give him a 5.


What can I say but, wow.  -_-


And link to the story, of course ;)


Storiesonline: http://www.storiesonline.net/sex-story/71998


Literotica: http://www.literotica.com/s/nude-holly-day


Lushstories: http://www.lushstories.com/stories/mature/nude-holly-day.aspx

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