“Like Riding a Bike” is out at SOL and Lush. \u00a0I posted the updates on Twitter, Facebook, the website, and my forum, but time was tight before work, so I skipped the update here, and apparently forgot when I got home :p<\/p>\n
Then I turned right around and forgot to post about the new Website Exclusive short story, “Sucksess” here as well.<\/p>\n
You can link up to them from the website if you missed them.<\/p>\n
Now, on to what I clicked “New Post” over. \u00a0I’ve been working on a story called, “A Fine Substitute” and I’m a good distance into the final sex scene. \u00a0Problem is, it feels flat.<\/p>\n
I put it down to think about it, and ended up wandering to the forum at Lit. \u00a0In the process of responding to a post, I got to thinking that I haven’t posted a MILF story from the woman’s point of view for a long time. \u00a0All of the recent ones have been from the guy’s perspective.<\/p>\n
Then that thought merged with the new story. \u00a0I think the problem is that there’s not enough over-the-top excitement for the guy in the story. \u00a0The MILF is exactly what the title says — a substitute. \u00a0A fine<\/em> one, but a substitute, nonetheless. \u00a0He’s into it, but not “oh my god, I can’t believe this is happening!” excited.<\/p>\n The MILF, on the other hand, is looking for a substitute for her vibrator. \u00a0Getting into bed with a young stud is going to provide that “best day ever!” feeling for her.<\/p>\n I’m going to try flipping the script on this one and start a version coming from her perspective to see how it goes. \u00a0It might very well solve the flat feeling of the story, and it certainly would put a new entry in a neglected segment of my dominant genre.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" “Like Riding a Bike” is out at SOL and Lush. \u00a0I posted the updates on Twitter, Facebook, the website, and my forum, but time was tight before work, so I skipped the update here, and apparently forgot when I got … Continue reading