Hmmm…

Reading back through the new Christmas story, it’s a little tension lite.  Oh, there’s a bit in the beginning, and there will be some more in the next section I write, but it’s resolved pretty quickly.

I think the sex will push buttons, but for those who’ve come to expect a bit more build-up, this one may be a bit lacking.

I could always work on the opening to ratchet it up, but there’s another problem.  Right now, it’s already sitting at around 7200 words, with a rather robust sex scene left to write.  As you know, I don’t like breaking the 7k word barrier.  I’ve done it with stories like Holly, but this one is almost pure gratification.

I’ll probably still post it, and then try to redeem myself with readers who expect a bit more story with their sex in a Christmas themed MILF story LOL

At least I have a title that I like now, which doesn’t show up on Literotica.  “Christmas In Eve”  It’s just too difficult to check SOL and Lush for story titles, so I’ll have to hope it’s as original there.

Feel free to comment about the story.  Would you mind a taboo story that doesn’t have quite the build-up of Peppermint Patty or Paige From Her Diary, so long as it has lots and lots of hot, dirty scenes?  LOL  This one is going to be Mom-Son-Aunt, delving into a new niche.