Long, annoying day at work yesterday.  I managed to finish the first cold read of “Sunny Daze” between last night and this morning, but it still needs to run through the three-step process of my first-pass edit before I send it off to my editor.

That other idea I had for the Autumn Equinox contest started feeling a little exploitative and creepy to me as I wrote it, so I ended up dropping it.  It may still work if I change Dawn’s personality and background, but I’m going to have to think about it.  Doing that will also change how some other elements in the story will have to work.